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Post by HeatherHalliwell on Sept 6, 2011 19:19:21 GMT -5
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Post by ranmasaotome on Sept 6, 2011 20:40:11 GMT -5
VERY good, Heather. We need to chat via PM.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 6, 2011 20:51:09 GMT -5
VERY good, Heather. We need to chat via PM. Don't let him get you drunk. You'll wake up married to him. Was a very good read though! And makes me more excited to be able to work with you finally! <3
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Post by ranmasaotome on Sept 6, 2011 23:09:33 GMT -5
The ladies love me...I am the Larry David of e-fedding. Oh wait...nevermind, DON'T PM me, haha, jk.
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Post by HeatherHalliwell on Sept 7, 2011 12:12:04 GMT -5
Let me know a good time to reach you, Joel. My own schedule is very subjective these days, so I'm on when I can be.
<3 Keiko! I'm excited too! Of course, my husband was being skeptical and couldn't understand the appeal creative writing in this style holds for me. I think it's cuz he wrestled for real and cut real promos and thought my doing it this way was dumb. I set him straight, but he still has his doubts and worries.
To both: THANK YOU!! Coming from the two of you, being told that my RP was good is a huge compliment.
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Post by Jason Mudd on Sept 7, 2011 12:27:33 GMT -5
I gave it a read last night, but was really tired. Forgot to comment on it, lol.
Absolutely loved it, hun. I think what did it for me was the way you did your detail, describing things. I was literally hooked in, by that alone, within the first three sentences.
<3
Can't wait to see what you come up with, when under the gun of an official match.
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Post by HeatherHalliwell on Sept 7, 2011 16:10:34 GMT -5
You have no idea how happy I am to hear that, actually. Sometimes I think I use TOO much detail and I worry about killing the RP with it. So Thank You so very very much.
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Post by The Ronin on Sept 7, 2011 21:44:18 GMT -5
Goes without saying, but I loved it! Looking forward to seeing what you produce in competition.
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Post by abc on Sept 7, 2011 22:05:34 GMT -5
My only criticism is that the kid who's supposed to be 6 is 5'1. I think they would need a major hormone deficiency to be that height. The average height of a 6 year old girl, according to the internet, is 3'5. Besides that, awesome to see your writing again. I agree with Mudd, the detail was great.
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Post by HeatherHalliwell on Sept 8, 2011 1:04:37 GMT -5
Bliz- I'm actually really glad you mentioned it. That was a typo that I missed in the proof read cuz this girl was being naughty and not wearing her glasses to read. That's actually supposed to read 4'1". Thanks to both Bliz and SJ for the compliments. :-D I feel a lot better moving forward into competition.
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